Thursday, April 11, 2013

Charlie the dog


Charlie the dog
I was chewing a piece of toast at nana’s house.
Suddenly  Charlie came darting through the house chasing after Holley
She ran to nana and said “ Charlie is chasing me”
Charlie runs in the kitchen at full speed then nana yells “Stop Charlie!”
Charlie stops straight away.  He sits down
Holley starts to laugh and I start to play with Charlie.

This poem was modeled on Katherine Mansfield's poem Butterfly Laughter.

2 comments:

  1. Awesome poem Heith

    Like how you put some speach in the poem

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