BARK! my dog Charlie snarls with excitement as I hooked his
leash to his collar.I start to walk him down the hill then he starts to tug on the leash he I spot a bunny Charlie pulls me over and drags me on the hard ground.
l let go of the leash and charlie darts across the paddock chasing after the bunny.Then the bunny runs into a hole under a blackberry bush then charlie loses sight of the bunny.
I grab his leash and tie him to a tree. I tell mum that if a bulldog can't catch it it should
be very fast mum said “True Heith true’’.
Funny story Heith. Did you try to look in the bunny's hole to see if you could spot him?
ReplyDeleteWhat good use of capital letters, full stops & speech marks! Great writing!
Rosie - CamO's mum
thats a fantastic story heith you need to teach nathan ;-)
DeleteRachel-Nathans mum
hi rosie but I would never stick my head under a black berry bush
DeleteOk Rachel
Deletelook forward to reading more stories Heith :)
ReplyDeletelook forward to reading more stories Heith :)
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DeleteExcellent Heith well done!! xo Grace Siataga-Adams (your cuzzy bro)
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DeleteThat is awesome Heith you had good capital letters and full stops
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